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Post by Ionar Sunshadow on Mar 12, 2011 4:27:06 GMT -5
((Shariadune commented on my MRP. I thought I'd share it with whomever wishes to read it. Prose just didn't work for me, so I've left it as it was. I'm solely interested in forum RP at the moment, however, I am available in-game for random RP. Enjoy!))
Race: Blood Elf Height: Average (6'3") Weight: Average (122lbs) Eyes: The color of a lime peel. Hair: Brown with red highlights; very thick, and always clean; tends to shine in the sun. Scent: Most noticeable is the smell of leather; under that is a sharp hint of poison; the least obvious can only be smelled when standing very close - the smell of earthroot, mountain silversage, and dreamfoil (think oldspice.).
Build: Agile and flexible; broad shoulders; muscle definition, but not bulk; most of his height is from his legs; proportionate feet that he treads very lightly on; larger hands with long, narrow fingers (piano players' hands).
Movements: tends to move fluidly, almost no side to side or up and down swaying as he walks; in combat he uses calculated, precise, quick, and smooth movements; out of combat he uses slower, more normal movements, though sometimes he gets twitchy.
Quirks: He's constantly brushing his bangs out of his eyes; it's very obvious when he checks women out, showing that he likes what he sees with a sneer; tends to bite on the inside right corner of his bottom lip.
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Post by calavel on Mar 12, 2011 7:01:34 GMT -5
((I enjoyed your description, especially:
Thanks for posting. I hope to see you in-game.))
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Post by Shari'Adune Forestsong on Mar 12, 2011 12:53:54 GMT -5
((Welcome! I see you added the scent, and it adds that extra bit to your character. Thank you for visiting and posting, I hope you enjoy/ed your stay. The things Calavel pointed out are things I also enjoyed very much, which prompted me to message you.
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Post by Ionar Sunshadow on Mar 12, 2011 18:24:39 GMT -5
((It was pointed out to me today, and I fully agree, that the weight I have posted for Ionar may be disgustingly out of proportion. Therefore, I wish to amend that part of his description.
Height: 6'3" Weight: 179 lbs.
I wanted him to be on the lighter side because he is required to be light, agile, and nimble on his feet due to his occupation. Thank you for the correction. I appreciate it very much. Any other observations or critiques are welcome.))
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