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Post by Ashton on Nov 10, 2018 22:47:18 GMT -5
Standing 6'5'', the man appeared to be in his early thirties, towering over quite a few people but around the same height as a Night Elf or Nightborne.
His stature was that of a bulwark: Muscular from head to toe, carrying with him an air of power and strength, but also of humility and fealty towards many.
His face was smooth, a deep cut in his jawline showing a square jaw. He did not have any piercings or tattoos to show of but he carried many scars on his body: Most notably a scar across his stomach that holds a large story of it's own.
Ashton's hair was a deep jet black color which he kept trimmed very short and close. He also sported a very nicely trimmed black beard which he is known to shave off on occasion.
When he speaks normally, he carries an air of the sea: A deep Kul'Tiran brogue with a hearty laugh. When he is attempting to pull information out of a target, his voice carries a more sinister tone to it: Brooding and full of hate.
When in battle armor, it is a deep copper color: Almost a blood red color. The helm that he carries has the visage of a grinning skull, capped with gold teeth and two wicked looking horns that curve down towards the teeth of the helm.
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Post by ۞ KAT ۞ AKA Red Viper on Nov 11, 2018 7:00:03 GMT -5
Now that is a nice lookin description! Only thing you don't really need is as that will always be changing based on where you char is/what they are doing. Plus, people can see what the armor looks like readily themselves eh? UNLESS, there are 'special' details on the armor you would like to make note of that one cannot see on the regular armor, like a notable gouge or something... in which case it should be written akin to : "When in battle armor... one would notice...." and describe the unique details not already shown.
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Post by Ashton on Nov 11, 2018 8:17:47 GMT -5
(( If you wish to remove that part, by all means! ))
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Post by Celeste on Nov 11, 2018 8:29:53 GMT -5
Character descriptions usually end up on your TRP3 profile for people to see. I think all that Kat really means is, if your armor is obvious in-game, there's no need to add it, since it would be redundant to a reader looking at your description text.
If, say, you decide to wear casual clothes to a party, why would a description of your armor be there for anyone to see when it was "left at home?"
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Post by ۞ KAT ۞ AKA Red Viper on Nov 11, 2018 8:35:22 GMT -5
There, gave you a subtle change. It allows you to keep it since you seem quite attached to it, and yet remains flexible in the description so that when he is wearing other things, people aren't twitching. When writing forum posts however, and you are describing what he is wearing at the time, times like that are great to let armor/clothing descriptions rise up.
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Post by Ashton on Nov 11, 2018 8:44:57 GMT -5
Oh I completely understand. Thank you for making that change for me. I really do enjoy his armor to be honest, it is his modus operandi and what he uses to get all of that information out of people: Fear.
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