Description of Kodu Silverleaf

[Kodu Silverleaf]

Kodu stands about as tall as the average Kaldorei male. His hair is a lighter shade of green with a slight blue tint to it, a trait he shares with his brother and sister as well. For centuries he kept his face clean shaven, though with the recent wars and events he has decided to grow it out some. His eyes glow with a soft yellow hue, and often seem to appear sharp and inquisitive. Around his neck hangs a loose but thick cord with pieces of small faded wooden totems.


He wears his hair long and straight, and is usually found wearing his dark hued robes and armor. Under that he has an athletic physique and build. His hands are rough and usually have feint stains of dirt on them. He normally wears boots but will also go barefoot if he feels he is in a sacred place such as a temple. While he has mastered the art of shapeshifting, he rarely does and is almost always seen in his Kaldorei form.


Kodu often has a serious look on his face, or that he seems to be in deep concentration. A few people who have studied under him have said that he is very hard to read based on facial expressions alone.

He has studied herbology for centuries and can often be found wandering through gardens whenever he travels. This has also lent him an extensive knowledge of alchemy, though he only applies jt when necessary.


Recently he has accepted a post as an ambassador for the Cenarian Circle and has been traveling more outside of the traditional Kaldorei lands. While he has cleaned up his robes and armor fir it, he still has a forest scent to him. Humans compare the smell to fresh grass after a spring rain.


Kodu is polite and enjoys talking to people. He is naturally wary of other races, but his post as Ambassador is helping him to reconcile that.

[Shari'Adune Forestsong]

((Hi there, welcome to the site. Since you are a potential, i will offer suggestions to better improve your lovely description. If you go HERE you will see perhaps where your description went a little off target.

Descriptions are just that, a physical description of your character. What we immediately see, hear, smell, and possibly touch IF we were to touch them.

In your post,

He has studied herbology for centuries and can often be found wandering through gardens whenever he travels. This has also lent him an extensive knowledge of alchemy, though he only applies jt when necessary.


Recently he has accepted a post as an ambassador for the Cenarian Circle and has been traveling more outside of the traditional Kaldorei lands. While he has cleaned up his robes and armor fir it, he still has a forest scent to him. Humans compare the smell to fresh grass after a spring rain.


Kodu is polite and enjoys talking to people. He is naturally wary of other races, but his post as Ambassador is helping him to reconcile that.

You have things that are not suitable for a description and should be instead, in a history area.

Remember, by looking at him, one would have no way to know how long he has studied herbalism (not herbology ) , and where he is wandering would be obvious as to where your toon actually is.

The scent part is well done and works with the description.

While he has cleaned up his robes and armor fir it, he still has a forest scent to him. Humans compare the smell to fresh grass after a spring rain.

Also, the last parts, again, no way to know those things by looking at him, so they too should be in a history area.

Kodu is polite and enjoys talking to people. He is naturally wary of other races, but his post as Ambassador is helping him to reconcile that.

This is something that would be more found out during RP, and lends little to a description area. However with a little different wording some of it could work. For example: Should races other than Kaldorei go near him he appears to be quite wary of them.

Anything about his post or title or whatever, is suitable more for the history area. But this is a very good first attempt!

Should you follow the guide and wish to post an updated character description, you can post it in this thread to see a before and after example, or, if you post it in a NEW thread i can simply delete this one for you if you like.